Oral presentation

Name & Topic: Laura Peña Surgery Plastic and Aesthetic

Presentation

1-Did you use any resources? Yes, I used power point.
2-Were the resources relevant and attractive? Yes, the resources relevant, attractive and also striking

Body language and eye contact

3- Did you look at your audience most of time? Not much, I watched Power Point
4- Did you read from your notes? Yes, because I was very nervous and I forgot parts of the text
5- Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience? I was too nervous to do it, but I didn’t do gestures but I held the attention with the photos.

Structure

6- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes, at first I explained what is. The difference and when my audience knew about the surgery I showed the results.
7- Did you use discourse markers to make your idea more clear? Yes, I did

Content

8- Did you introduce interesting, New information to your audience? Yes
9- Did you look up information/ facts/ideas in the Internet, books..? Yes, everything, because at first I didn’t know anything about the surgery.
10- Was your information more superficial or more detailed and original? I explained all I could and got of the topic, but I didn’t give detail because it’s a difficult topic

Language

11- Did you use check your grammar? Yes
12- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary? Yes
13- Did you use sentence linkers? Yes, I used: and, but and also...
14- Did you use fillers? Yes, I used: above, well, for example…

Pronunciation & Intonation

15-Did you know how to pronounce all your words? Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? Yes, I knew. Yes some of them.

16- Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? I didn’t use the same tone of voice, my tone of voice down when I was unsure. With breaks and interruptions

Self-Evaluation

You are the teacher! What mark did you get? If I had been a teacher, I would get a 6 or more, I don’t know, I was very nervous, I didn’t know how I did.


2- Now it’s time to improve for next presentation. Write down a LITERAL TRANSCRIPTION of your presentation

Well, I’m going to speak about plastic surgery and , I will explain a little bit like what the people do and the result. This is not a personal topic, but I like this topic because I like medicine and things about it.
What is plastic surgery?
Plastic Surgery is a surgical specialty that deals with the correction of any body part.
What is the difference between plastic and static?
Plastic Surgery restores or improves function and appearance when you have accidents, burns or diseases and tumors of the skin and support tissues and congenital anomalies.
However the Aesthetic Plastic Surgery deals with generally healthy patients and aims at correcting abnormalitiesThis affects the emotional stability by improving the quality of life through professional relationships, emotional, and so on.
Why do people do it?
The decision to have an operation of Aesthetic Surgery is very individual, there are a lot of influencing factors, but one of the most important is society, to have a young and dynamic appearance.
The appearance is one of the things that people give importance to.It is also fashion and beauty. These reasons have a negative influence on the person so they drive people to do it.
Before the surgery they see your clinical record, they do a study of what they can do photos, analysis, x-rays. And also information about the economy of the person.
Are there risks?
As in all operations there are risks and complications and there are also sometimes sequel. There are two different kinds of risks:
-Health risks; include those resulting from the operation, complications and sequel as motivated by the anaesthesia.-Aesthetic risk; the quality of the result and the dissatisfaction that could cause a poor outcome.-And when the patient dies.
Result:
There are three different results; good result, intermediate result and bad result.
- In this photo you can see a woman who had WRINKLES after the woman had an operation and now she looks younger.
- This is a woman who had a good change.
- This woman has had a significant change, I think
- This girl has had a nose and bags under the eyes operation, also is a good change.
- This woman has had a significant change.
- This is a photo that BREAST REDUCTION
Look at this photo! In here you can see two wemen, they are addicted to the operations, you can see the result. It’s incredible. Remember when we watched thirteen; Evie’s mother was addicted to these kinds of operations.
àNow you can see a statistic about the surgery. There are more people that don’t like the surgery than the people that do.
Well, that’s end of my oral presentation, I hope you enjoy it!
Thanks for the attention
Have you got any questions?


Check your Language and Structure. Can you correct your mistakes?
The next oral presentation is in pairs and I think that it’s better because you have more security and support. I think that this is the first oral presentation and speaking in front of the people is impressive and even more when it is not your language.
In the next oral presentation I would like to look more at my audience, and not be nervous, I'll try to be calm. Also I'll try to make my oral presentation longer than the first, and if I can make it interesting and better, now I know how to do the oral presentation and what how you feel when staying in there. I think that in my oral presentation I invented a lot of words… but that was because of the nervousness.


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